Wednesday 1 June 2016

The Cool Lounge

Below is my poetry called The Cool Lounge, it is based on The Old Alley. You'll see I've used adjectives, nouns and verbs. I hope you enjoy my poem.

Soft couch releasing air as I sit.
Big green blanket, moulding around my skin as I put it on.
The warm morning sun, shining through the fogged glass windows.
The cool breeze rushing through the open gaps of the windows.
The cold fog, halting me from going outside.
My AWESOME family crowding the smell of pancakes.
Light green grass, slightly waving in the soft breeze.

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